What is a character profile?
A character profile is a gathering of information about a character in
your manuscript that keeps track of their vital information: appearance,
behaviour and motivation. It may contain a picture if you prefer and it can be
as detailed or basic as you like. Its primary purpose is a reference to keep
the details of your story consistent.
So don’t over-think it.
Main characters VS secondary
characters:
There is a special trick when it comes to main character profiles VS
secondary character profiles:
Firstly, you should use exactly the same profile template for main
characters and all other characters, even the most MINOR shop keeper or
blow-through.
Secondly, while you should try and fill in all of your main character
profiles before you start writing your novel, you only need to fill in
secondary characters info as you put it in the story. Name them, give them some
critical details, but don’t fill in the stuff that doesn’t appear in the novel.
Otherwise, you would end up with hundreds of pages of profiles for characters
who are only in the novel for a few sentences.
However if you make a note of how you describe them (I like to clip and
paste from the manuscript text), their personality, where they appear/live and
their primary goal, you can quickly reference it if your main characters meet
that character again. That way you won’t have to flip back through your novel
looking for that obscure scene to check if you made them very short or how long
their handlebar moustache was.
What should you put in a
character profile?
So what actually goes in a character profile? I like to tailor mine to
the novel in question. In different settings, different information will be
important. However there are a few universal things you should always cover:
The basics:
Name, age, gender, hair, eyes, skin tone, height and weight.
The expanded basics:
Parents names, siblings, any other relevant family, friends and their
relationship with all those people. Where they were born, where they live,
their occupation and education, their title or rank, if they live in a world
that is relevant.
The stuff that actually matters:
Their personality, morality and beliefs, their habits, interests and
mannerisms, their background, their character arc, their internal conflicts and
their external conflicts.
Both the basics and the expanded basics are just there to help you keep
facts straight. They have very little impact on the story—even though they may
be important to the character, they probably hold no real interest to the
reader.
However the stuff that matters is the core of your story. It’s what
makes your characters engaging and real. Which is why it’s getting its own blog
post next week.
Maintenance and Upkeep:
Like your timeline, your character profiles need to develop with your
story.
There will be new things to keep track of, relationships, motives and
developments. Your character may be injured in chapter three and you’ll want to
make a note of where and how badly so that remains consistent throughout the following
chapters.
You also may want to make a note about less tangible things. If you are
writing a romance, for example, you may want to make notes about the way the
characters develop between each scene, as that emotional arc is the focus of
the story.
I like using scrivener for my first drafts in particular, as it allows
me to create a folder called ‘Characters’, mock up an empty profile and just
duplicate it as new characters are introduced. Whenever I want to check my
notes, they are right there and I can open them as a split screen while I am
writing the scene. I can add photos and earlier descriptions to the file, their
parent’s names and job title are all there. I don’t have to look anywhere else
for the information I need. This is a great time saver and stops me becoming
distracted as I either scroll through old text or have to minimize the novel to
open the profile.
I also keep my character profiles in alphabetical order—particularly when
dealing with a large fantasy cast. It’s
also simpler to have two sub folders, one for main characters and one for minor
characters. Setting up a new project this way takes a little longer at the beginning,
but makes life so much easier in the long run.
Week Two’s Exercise:
It’s time to set up a character profile template—either in word or
Scrivener. Add all the things that are important to you and your storyline. You
would be adding to mine, not detracting. Here’s one of mine to use as reference:
Name: (Including title EG:
Ms, Dr, Prince, etc)
Gender:
Age:
Physical Description: (Eyes,
hair, height, weight, skin tone)
_____________
Parents: (Names, occupations
and characters relationship with them)
Siblings: (As above)
Friends/Workmates: (As Above
with other important people in their life.)
Other Family: (As above with
extended family)
Born/Live: (Where were they
born and where do they live now.)
Education/Job:
Title/Rank: (If relevant to
setting and not covered by name)
Clothes: (Style, etc)
______________
History: (Their life until
the story starts)
Character Arc: (What happens
to them in the story, summarised by a few sentances)
Most Desires/Most Fears: (This
should be tied into their personality and conflicts)
Internal Conflicts:
External Conflicts:
Habits/Mannerisms/Hobbies:
(Quirks you want to remember to make them feel real. EG: Hair pulling, nail
chewing.)
Morals & Beliefs:
Personality: (Five or six
personality descriptive words. EG: Happy, intelligent, thoughtful, selfish,
etc)
